Adolf Hitler & Charlie Chaplin

NEWS
I got the SECOND PRIZE in our class, 23!
Actually, I think this is not very good because I just spent like 4 hours.
And also, Crystal's - who became third and applicant - speech was actually better than me.
She had a good content, good organization, and good voice -- but I just won by the time management.
However, I am the one who is going to be at the Speech Contest. I have to make my speech stronger.
So, I am editing some of my speech... And this is my speech that I did in the class.

MY SPEECH
Hello, everyone. My name is Na Eun Lee, and today, I will talk about 'Adolf Hitler and Charlie Chaplin". Most of you may do not know the relation ship and the reason why I am comparing two of them. However, actually, they are born in nearly same time, because Hitler was born on 20th of April, 1889, and Chaplin was born in 16th of April, same year. Then even though the time they lived and their environment were same, the became totally different people, and they became an enemy. This can be mentioned because Charlie Chaplin made the movie about teasing and sarcasting Hitler. I will talk about Chaplin and Hitler more specifically. I will first mention about their life, and then I will talk about my opinion of two of them.

Adolf Hitler and Charles Spencer Chaplin's childhoods were both hard and poor. Chaplin was born by Charlees and Hanner Chaplin. Because his parents got a divorce, he lived with his mother and his older brother, Sydney. His mother was not very healthy and went to mental hospital very much, and the brothers lived from the money that 8-year-old young Charlie earned from the stage. He gradually became famous, and became an actor. However, after he was successed, his personal life was not easy. He married 4 times, but with three of them, their marriage went not very long. However, he lived his life with the fourth life, Una Onil. Also, he had a torture of banning his movie in the country, and he was believed as a communist from others sometimes. And the most torture was the he was banned in America for 20 years. Really, Charlie Chaplin's life was very hard and had lost of sadness and torture. In the other hand, Adolf Hitler was born between the public service personnel, who was his father, and Clara Hitler, the mother. He was a little shocked and tortured by his brother's and sister's deaths. However, the critical torture and problem was his mother's death, and World War I. He ensisted the Bavarian army, because he petitioned King Ludwig II of Bavaria. Hitler became braver and braver in there, but he got temporarily blinded by a mustard gas attack. The blindness may have been a result of conversion disorder called "Hysteria". This is when he was convinced he had to "save Germany". After Wordl War I, Hitler became a police spy of an Intelligence Commando and had a small party with other soldiers. During his inspection of ithe party, Hitler was impressed with the ideas of  "Non-Jewish", and from then, he nearly did that.

As I said, Hitler and Chaplin both had hard childhoods. Especially, Chaplin had a torture while he was an adult, too, and had an unlucky life. Also, they were same with that they each had a thing that they were very good at it. Chaplin had a good acting skills, and Hitler had a good political skills. I think that this is the result that how they got their mind in childhood, and also in adulthood. Chaplin was not giving up or being angry at his environment, and didn't lose his mind until he died. But, Hitler became evil with his torture while he was in early adulthood. These two people really have lots of differences, but also similarities. The most easy ones to find are their mustaches and their faces. However, I think that their personality has no similarities. How could a kind and an evil mind can have similarity?

In conclusion, there were two people who will be related in future. One grew up inot a infamous dictator, who gave people a tear. Another child grew up and became a legend of the movie director and actor, who gave people a happiness. They had a same environment in childhood, same tortures, and they lived in the same period. They are the really famous and infamous people; Charlie Chaplin, and Adolf Hitler, who gave the both tears and smile to people's face in the same time.

This is the end of my speech. Thank you for your time and attention.