Writing Chain: In the future.. / By Class 23

 INTRODUCTION
1. Does it makes sense?
 - Yes, it does, even though some parts, I can't understand a little.
2. Do you like it?
 - This essay is little different that I thought to be, but, yeah, it is good, and I like it.
3. How did it change?
 - This is the exact question that I thought the teacher would ask me. At first, when I was writing, I wrote about the beautiful things in future, but in the end, people wrote about the dirty and not good thing about the future.


WRITING CHAIN ESSAY
In the future, our technology will be very developed. We may have a flying car, at least 3 robots in each house, and we could go to the moon hotel or sea hotel. This will be very fantastic and convinient to people. But because robots are too similar to human, we can lose our speciality. Althoug it is hard to understand, it can be possible that robots and human can marry, too. Because robots continue to develop, sometimes people can think about putting animal's heart into robots to make them to feel emotion. Then women and men will marry the 'perfect' person, than the world's population will decrease severly. Isn't it curious that this will really happen? So let's ride the time machine and go to the future~ <BBishurg->


<Pabat-> Now, we arrived in Korea, 2073, January 12. Let's go around this country. Oh, there's a flying car! However, that is not so great than I thought. Actually, it is even disgusting! Cars are flying without caring that they are flying over the open dome of a nutrition controlling facility, which is making a special health care food product. they are throwing garbages outside of their car! There are no one who can close the dome or find a solution now, because there is no real human employees now working in lunch time. Only the 'heartless' robots are left in the factory, and they can't do something they are not allowed to, or not programmed  to. What an awful situation! Now, we found that people in the future will eat expensive foods which are filled with trashes, such as a half-eaten sandwitches or a rotten cat's food. Okay, I really want to go to the another place. <BBishurg->


<Pabat-> Here we are in the national science center! At this science center, people are still making robots, even though there are plenty of robots in this country. These people believe that the only way to survive is by making more robots, and they don't care that people are decreasing because of their works and creations. They only care about themselves, and their money. I think these people are even more disgusting and awful than the people who throw away half-eaten sandwitches or a rotten cat's food. Ugh- I want to leave this place. We will go to a different place. Hurry! <BBishurg->


<Pabat-> Now we have arrived at our last place. This is where the people in this country lives. On the outside, it looks clean. Then, let's have a look at the inside. iew, what a mess! Threre are laundries all over the room and the useless robots in this house are doing nothing about it while the people are watching them all the time. I am really disappointed about this situation and this future. However, the future depends to us. It can change, or go like this. I wish our future will be better and bright. Bye!


CONCLUSION
1. What did you think?
 - I think this situation can be happend in future. It is kinda scary, but we have to try to not make this situation. Thank you for reading my writing chain.
P.S. : I can't understand <BBishurg-> -- Is there no one to tell me about this?-.-
 <Pabat-> = <파밧->